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Parker McCoy's avatar

Hehe. Very haunting ending. Sometimes life definitely is not fair, especially when you kill a whole bottle. It might kill you back. Awesome story.

Krysten Williams's avatar

Disturbing! I like it, and the sense of hopelessness in the ending was really well done.

mika's avatar

that was such a good story I love the way its said and how it ended was also so freaking good

David Wilde's avatar

Very good. I totally thought he was abducted by a weirdo clear up to the end.

Anastasiia Shafran's avatar

Scene set so vividly with just dialogue. Intense!

Bite-Sized Horror's avatar

Really wanted to write something with only dialogue. Hope you enjoyed the result! : )